Not Unkindly

I just read this book

The only good thing I can say about it, is that it ended. 

In the books defense I am not a Zombie fan, so it was my own fault for willingly buying a Zombie book.  

But that was not what I didn't like about it. (I mean, not totally.)  It was the way the book was written.  I read a whole book with these kinds of descriptions. 

"He put his hand on my cheek, using his thumb to brush away a tear, then he leaned in to kiss me.  When he stopped, he closed his eyes and rested his forehead against mine."     

Ok, I would get into it and then it would say "when he stopped,"   WHEN HE STOPPED?  Girl, what did it taste like, feel like, sound like??? He is leaving her and he wont know the next time he will see her.  WHEN HE STOPPED?

I don't even really know what the characters looked like!!  Except that one has long wavy dark hair and another has tattoos.  That's basically it. 

My biggest pet peeve is the phrase NOT UNKINDLY.  I hate this phrase.  It makes my Dyslexia have a seizure.

not un positive, which is kindly

and not negative, which is not unkindly

The first time I read it in her book "My blood Approves" I was like Hummm...  Then she put it about 17 more times in the SAME book. 

"He said, not unkindly."  Not unkindly?  Why is this stressing me out so much? 

I think its because she is a millionaire and I'm jealous that she can write a book that has a phrase like "Not Unkindly" in it and still be successful. 

And , again, only because it had an ending!